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He gave a mouth to mouth to
unconscious Khushi. But the highly effective drug that was used to kidnap her
and then being without meal for following days had totally drained her out. Her
pulses were going down. He soon called for his maid.
Arnav: Gurpreet!! GURPREET!!
His 40+ old maid ran to the room to her master's call.
Gurpreet: Ji Maalik.
Arnav: Paani che mitta glucose golke lai aa. Chethi kar.
Bring some water with Glucose sugar in it. Fast!!
Gurpreet: Hune leyai
Will just bring it!
Saying she vanished and in sometime she came back with a glass of glucose water in it.
Gurpreet: Aa layo Maalik
Here it is chief.
Arnav took it from her and started feeding Khushi little by little letting her swallow it and gain energy and raise her sugar level. Then he turned to his maid.
Arnav: Gurpreet, chethi ja te dhoodh naal roti leya te nale dhoodh che vad meetta padi. Chethi kar ja.
Get some milk and bread fast. And add extra sugar in milk. Go fast.
Gurpreet ran at once to fulfill her master's order. But not before thinking his weird behavior. Because he has never cared for anyone before. He brought girls for one or two nights but not in torpor. She was seeing someone new in her maalik. She did as she was asked too and left the place following Arnav's orders.
Arnav sat on the bed next to her and started patting her cheeks.
Arnav: Khushi!! Wake up. I SAID WAKE UP DAMMIT!! KHUSHI!!
He kept on calling her name and patting her cheeks. And after sometime, Khushi responded feebly and then coughed off the water he fed her. He never felt so relieved. He made her sit on his bed with her back against the headboard and arranged pillows to rest her back comfortably ignoring her protests. Then he took the tray from the nightstand and placed it on the bed. He took the bread and milk and pushed it in her hand. Khushi lashed his hand and said slowly yet strongly.
Khushi: Don't you dare touch me!
Arnav: you can argue later. First have this bread and milk.
Khushi: I don't want to eat anything at the cost of my respect. And I dint come to your room. So its not my count.
Saying she started leaving to the room given to her in unsteady steps. Arnav followed her with her food shouting and yelling her name. but Khushi stubbornly sat on the bed with her arms folded. If it was anyother moment Arnav would have been amused by her childish antics. But for now she has to eat. He caught her hand and stuffed the plate.
Arnav: Khushi, don't create a scene. Eat the food!
Khushi: Chodiye hamein.. Humne kaha hamein kuch nahi khana. Kuch nahi peena. Aapki himmat kese huyi hamein chune ki? Hamare jeeney ya marne se aapko kya farak padta hai?
Leave me. I said I don't want to eat or drink anything. How dare you touch me? I live or die, what difference does it make to you?
Saying she pushed his hand which angered him more. He caught her and stuffed the food in her mouth.
Arnav: No one dared to talk to me, to Arnav Singh Raizada like that. When I say eat, EAT!! And DON'T RAISE YOUR DAMN VOICE!!
Saying he forcibly made her eat the bread and drink the milk. Khushi was doing silently as asked. All the time she was wondering,
Khushi(ST): he is beast one time forcing me and another time he is like prince taking care of me and making me eat. What is he?
Arnav saw her and smirked knowing that she is melting somewhere. After all who can resist Arnav Singh Raizada?
Arnav: don't think too much Khushi. I am making you eat for my own good. Do you know giving little food for someone who has stayed without food for long will worsen their hunger? Same is the case with you. Now that I have given you very little food after a long time, your hunger will increase. So you will have to come to me Khushi.
Saying he smiled like a devil. Khushi for a minute dint know what to say as he caught her thinking about him. But then she gathered herself.
Khushi: Don't get any ideas Mr. Raizada. I know that a Beast like you can never treat anyone humanly.
Arnav: you know? That's better. So now take rest as later you may get tired when i.. you know?
He drawled with a smirk as Khushi's face became red. He then went out leaving her to fight her demons. Khushi thought to herself. The little food gave her little energy to think clearly and do something about her fate. Arnav went to check his estates and the workers.
Khushi was tired of this now. She tried to find a way out of this Beast palace. But no avail. She was cornered in every possible way by maids and those bodyguards. She was tired. Her heartbeat risen, breathe get unsteady, stomach empty, lips dried and face pale yet she is not ready to stop all she want is to get rid of this hell to save herself from this beast. But unfortunately she is not finding any way to run anywhere. Everything seems mysterious and blur. It was like she is locked up for lifetime in jumanji puzzle game. More she tried to solve the puzzle again came back to the same place where she started her journey. She have lost all her patience and now cannot take this anymore. She wanted to save her dignity anyhow. She cannot let this monster lustful desire shadow upon her she would rather prefer death other than submitting herself. She again came back to her room getting aimlessly. Then she saw that her room window opened to the garden behind the palace. she thought of trying once more. The only way she is finding to jump from the window to the gate and if successful she can save herself. Chanting devimaiyya name, she gathered courage and pull the bed-sheet and fold it like a rope and hang it on the windowpane to get down.
She was feeling scared seeing the height and then heard that monster footsteps. Without thinking anything she hurriedly began getting down with the help of robe. Her heart beat rose up seeing two dogs downward barking at her hungrily and angrily. She was swinging from the window in middle and on the other hand Arnav was standing near the window watching her amusingly.
Arnav: Khushi come up..marna hain kya?
Want to die?
He raised his hand to help her to lead her upward.
Khushi: Agar aapke madad se hi hamein bachna hai toh nahi chahiye hamein esi ehsaan se dabi zindagi. ise toh hum marna hi teek samajhte hain.
If by taking your help i will be saved then i don't want it i don't want such life.. I would rather prefer death
Saying she stubbornly continued moving down without giving any damn to his so called help. She don't care about herself. She had made up her mind she would not back off this time.
By seeing her attitude, devil awaken inside him. ''Bhul gaya tha main girna toh tumhari fitrat mein hain''! (I forgot its your habit to stoop low.) He saw that the bed cover with which she was hanging was about to give up. without wasting much time, he just pulled it out letting her fall.
Arnav: THIS IS YOUR PUNISHMENT FOR MESSING WITH ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA
Khushi: Ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Khushi went straight down, while Arnav moved from the window. Khushi closed her eyes anticipating the pain and even being meat to the beasts of the beast. But she landed safely on something like Bed. She was still scared to open her eyes and see those big dogs with sharp teeth. But she was pulled and shielded safely in a pair of strong arms. She jerked out and opened her eyes only to see herself in Arnav's arms sitting in a fluffy Sofa in his lap. She turned around to see for the dogs but found them being tied by the guards and breathed in relief.
Arnav: Escaping are we?
Khushi: Why did you save me? How the hell there is a sofa here?
Arnav: this is my garden where I like to sit and read. Does this explain the sofa?
Khushi: but this was not here when..
Arnav: My servants work on my eye movement. Its not difficult for them to push the sofa from beneath the shade to here and tie Rogo and Roxie.
Khushi: Do they bite Mr. Raizada?
Khushi trembled visibly.
Arnav: you are asking this now? After you were ready to serve your flesh as their meal? You amuse me Khushi!!
He chuckled making her angry. She pushed him and freed herself. She was about to walk when her legs were about to give up due to all the events that shook her and lack of enough meal. Arnav caught her immediately and carried her in his arms ignoring her protests.
Khushi: What are you doing? Leave me.
Arnav: There is no more leaving you. There is a limit to my patience which you crossed today with your plan to escape Khushi. Kumari. Gupta. And you are not at all spared for it.
Khushi: What do you mean?
Arnav: I mean that, your time to take your choice is over. Now its my action time. I gave you time to accept this. But you stubborn woman preferred dying. So I prefer being beast than Human I tried to be.
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Saying he threw her on his bed. He had already dismissed all his servants. He quickly locked the door and neared her who was trying hard to stand on her feet. But her body started giving up. And before she could do something or fall somewhere, he caught her and pushed her back to the bed.
Arnav: Its waste now trying. Today no going back Khushi! YOU WILL BE MINE!
Khushi tried pushing him. But it was too late. He was already on top of her kissing her neck, roaming his hands on her body. Her fragile body which was on hunger strike for more than 4 days, started giving up to struggle. But her sub conscious mind gave her the strength to fight. But he was fast and strong.
He slowly moved up her kurti placing wet kisses on her belly and midriff making her feel disgust on her own self. He was taking her pride which she thought of giving to her husband who can claim her rightfully. She closed her eyes in pain but her hands were still feebly trying to stop him. Arnav held her hand above her head and warned her removing her kurti completely.
Arnav: I am going slow doesn't mean that you can try stopping me. your struggle will only make things worse. So better surrender than protest. Else you will be not even fit to cry on your condition.
Saying he bit above her bra line harshly. She let out a cry and said struggling.
Khushi: I am.. Not.. someone.. who would ..c.. cry.. for no.. mis.. take.. of mine.. claim..ing.. my.. body.. like.. this.. doe..snt make.. you vic..tor!!!
Arnav: You are not co operating!! You will Regret this Khushi. A big time.
He tore her bra and threw it somewhere. Now her upper body was let out for his hungry eyes. In his eyes, she was perfect. Not that he has never seen woman before. But she was different. She was the one who protested him and he wanted to bring her on her knees before him. ASR loved challenges!! He touched her one nipple and pinched it. Khushi let out another cry and her hands were trying to push him on his chest and trying to hide herself. But was that possible when Beast was in his full form? Arnav was more than aroused with just the sight of her.
He removed his shirt and pants and bend on her completely. He took her one nipple in his mouth and kneaded the other. She kept hitting him and grabbed his hair to push him away. There was no strength left in her to say anything out of her mouth. His hand slowly moved to her PJs and in one movement he pushed it out of her. There was only one scrap of cloth covering her from his dark eyes. He tore that and placed his mouth over. He bit it, licked it and in short, he was putting her through hell for his personal pleasure. When he was enough hard he came up and looked at her red eyes and her hands that lay defeated on her side. There was a grave look in her eyes that his dark eyes saw but not noticed at the moment. He pulled out his boxers letting him out to stand proudly.
Arnav: Never a woman drove me so crazy Khushi! You are perfect in all senses for me and YOU ARE MINE!!
Saying he moved in her breaking her virgin wall. She let out a loud cry which he suppressed in his mouth closing her mouth. He bit her lips and entered his tongue in her mouth taking pleasure in all possible ways. Khushi clutched the pillow beneath her head in death grip. Her mind was repeating only one thing.
SHE LOST THE BATTLE!! SHE LET THE BEAST WIN HER BODY!! SHE LOST!!
SHE LOST!!
SHE LOST!!
He kept thrusting in her not minding her virgin blood spreading over his bed. He thrust till the beast in him got his claim and came undone. He poured him in her and bit her hard on her neck marking her as his completely. When he was about to move out he heard her feeble voice.
Khushi: You are a beast! I will never let you win. You will regret!
Arnav smirked.
Arnav: I am beast Khushi! But don't forget that you and only you are responsible for whatever happened to you!! What is there for me to regret. I am enjoying this. its pleasure!!
Saying he once again bit her above her collar bone. But she did not cry this time as she passed out because of the events that took toll on her fragile body!
Arnav gathered her in his arms and slept covering them in a quilt.
He will never let her go out of his cage that he has set up for her. This beauty is this Beast's for lifetime.
Devi Maiyya smiled seeing this.
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CHAPTER 8: I OWN YOU!
Arnav: Gurpreet!! GURPREET!!
His 40+ old maid ran to the room to her master's call.
Gurpreet: Ji Maalik.
Arnav: Paani che mitta glucose golke lai aa. Chethi kar.
Bring some water with Glucose sugar in it. Fast!!
Gurpreet: Hune leyai
Will just bring it!
Saying she vanished and in sometime she came back with a glass of glucose water in it.
Gurpreet: Aa layo Maalik
Here it is chief.
Arnav took it from her and started feeding Khushi little by little letting her swallow it and gain energy and raise her sugar level. Then he turned to his maid.
Arnav: Gurpreet, chethi ja te dhoodh naal roti leya te nale dhoodh che vad meetta padi. Chethi kar ja.
Get some milk and bread fast. And add extra sugar in milk. Go fast.
Gurpreet ran at once to fulfill her master's order. But not before thinking his weird behavior. Because he has never cared for anyone before. He brought girls for one or two nights but not in torpor. She was seeing someone new in her maalik. She did as she was asked too and left the place following Arnav's orders.
Arnav sat on the bed next to her and started patting her cheeks.
Arnav: Khushi!! Wake up. I SAID WAKE UP DAMMIT!! KHUSHI!!
He kept on calling her name and patting her cheeks. And after sometime, Khushi responded feebly and then coughed off the water he fed her. He never felt so relieved. He made her sit on his bed with her back against the headboard and arranged pillows to rest her back comfortably ignoring her protests. Then he took the tray from the nightstand and placed it on the bed. He took the bread and milk and pushed it in her hand. Khushi lashed his hand and said slowly yet strongly.
Khushi: Don't you dare touch me!
Arnav: you can argue later. First have this bread and milk.
Khushi: I don't want to eat anything at the cost of my respect. And I dint come to your room. So its not my count.
Saying she started leaving to the room given to her in unsteady steps. Arnav followed her with her food shouting and yelling her name. but Khushi stubbornly sat on the bed with her arms folded. If it was anyother moment Arnav would have been amused by her childish antics. But for now she has to eat. He caught her hand and stuffed the plate.
Arnav: Khushi, don't create a scene. Eat the food!
Khushi: Chodiye hamein.. Humne kaha hamein kuch nahi khana. Kuch nahi peena. Aapki himmat kese huyi hamein chune ki? Hamare jeeney ya marne se aapko kya farak padta hai?
Leave me. I said I don't want to eat or drink anything. How dare you touch me? I live or die, what difference does it make to you?
Saying she pushed his hand which angered him more. He caught her and stuffed the food in her mouth.
Arnav: No one dared to talk to me, to Arnav Singh Raizada like that. When I say eat, EAT!! And DON'T RAISE YOUR DAMN VOICE!!
Saying he forcibly made her eat the bread and drink the milk. Khushi was doing silently as asked. All the time she was wondering,
Khushi(ST): he is beast one time forcing me and another time he is like prince taking care of me and making me eat. What is he?
Arnav saw her and smirked knowing that she is melting somewhere. After all who can resist Arnav Singh Raizada?
Arnav: don't think too much Khushi. I am making you eat for my own good. Do you know giving little food for someone who has stayed without food for long will worsen their hunger? Same is the case with you. Now that I have given you very little food after a long time, your hunger will increase. So you will have to come to me Khushi.
Saying he smiled like a devil. Khushi for a minute dint know what to say as he caught her thinking about him. But then she gathered herself.
Khushi: Don't get any ideas Mr. Raizada. I know that a Beast like you can never treat anyone humanly.
Arnav: you know? That's better. So now take rest as later you may get tired when i.. you know?
He drawled with a smirk as Khushi's face became red. He then went out leaving her to fight her demons. Khushi thought to herself. The little food gave her little energy to think clearly and do something about her fate. Arnav went to check his estates and the workers.
Khushi was tired of this now. She tried to find a way out of this Beast palace. But no avail. She was cornered in every possible way by maids and those bodyguards. She was tired. Her heartbeat risen, breathe get unsteady, stomach empty, lips dried and face pale yet she is not ready to stop all she want is to get rid of this hell to save herself from this beast. But unfortunately she is not finding any way to run anywhere. Everything seems mysterious and blur. It was like she is locked up for lifetime in jumanji puzzle game. More she tried to solve the puzzle again came back to the same place where she started her journey. She have lost all her patience and now cannot take this anymore. She wanted to save her dignity anyhow. She cannot let this monster lustful desire shadow upon her she would rather prefer death other than submitting herself. She again came back to her room getting aimlessly. Then she saw that her room window opened to the garden behind the palace. she thought of trying once more. The only way she is finding to jump from the window to the gate and if successful she can save herself. Chanting devimaiyya name, she gathered courage and pull the bed-sheet and fold it like a rope and hang it on the windowpane to get down.
She was feeling scared seeing the height and then heard that monster footsteps. Without thinking anything she hurriedly began getting down with the help of robe. Her heart beat rose up seeing two dogs downward barking at her hungrily and angrily. She was swinging from the window in middle and on the other hand Arnav was standing near the window watching her amusingly.
Arnav: Khushi come up..marna hain kya?
Want to die?
He raised his hand to help her to lead her upward.
Khushi: Agar aapke madad se hi hamein bachna hai toh nahi chahiye hamein esi ehsaan se dabi zindagi. ise toh hum marna hi teek samajhte hain.
If by taking your help i will be saved then i don't want it i don't want such life.. I would rather prefer death
Saying she stubbornly continued moving down without giving any damn to his so called help. She don't care about herself. She had made up her mind she would not back off this time.
By seeing her attitude, devil awaken inside him. ''Bhul gaya tha main girna toh tumhari fitrat mein hain''! (I forgot its your habit to stoop low.) He saw that the bed cover with which she was hanging was about to give up. without wasting much time, he just pulled it out letting her fall.
Arnav: THIS IS YOUR PUNISHMENT FOR MESSING WITH ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA
Khushi: Ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Khushi went straight down, while Arnav moved from the window. Khushi closed her eyes anticipating the pain and even being meat to the beasts of the beast. But she landed safely on something like Bed. She was still scared to open her eyes and see those big dogs with sharp teeth. But she was pulled and shielded safely in a pair of strong arms. She jerked out and opened her eyes only to see herself in Arnav's arms sitting in a fluffy Sofa in his lap. She turned around to see for the dogs but found them being tied by the guards and breathed in relief.
Arnav: Escaping are we?
Khushi: Why did you save me? How the hell there is a sofa here?
Arnav: this is my garden where I like to sit and read. Does this explain the sofa?
Khushi: but this was not here when..
Arnav: My servants work on my eye movement. Its not difficult for them to push the sofa from beneath the shade to here and tie Rogo and Roxie.
Khushi: Do they bite Mr. Raizada?
Khushi trembled visibly.
Arnav: you are asking this now? After you were ready to serve your flesh as their meal? You amuse me Khushi!!
He chuckled making her angry. She pushed him and freed herself. She was about to walk when her legs were about to give up due to all the events that shook her and lack of enough meal. Arnav caught her immediately and carried her in his arms ignoring her protests.
Khushi: What are you doing? Leave me.
Arnav: There is no more leaving you. There is a limit to my patience which you crossed today with your plan to escape Khushi. Kumari. Gupta. And you are not at all spared for it.
Khushi: What do you mean?
Arnav: I mean that, your time to take your choice is over. Now its my action time. I gave you time to accept this. But you stubborn woman preferred dying. So I prefer being beast than Human I tried to be.
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Saying he threw her on his bed. He had already dismissed all his servants. He quickly locked the door and neared her who was trying hard to stand on her feet. But her body started giving up. And before she could do something or fall somewhere, he caught her and pushed her back to the bed.
Arnav: Its waste now trying. Today no going back Khushi! YOU WILL BE MINE!
Khushi tried pushing him. But it was too late. He was already on top of her kissing her neck, roaming his hands on her body. Her fragile body which was on hunger strike for more than 4 days, started giving up to struggle. But her sub conscious mind gave her the strength to fight. But he was fast and strong.
He slowly moved up her kurti placing wet kisses on her belly and midriff making her feel disgust on her own self. He was taking her pride which she thought of giving to her husband who can claim her rightfully. She closed her eyes in pain but her hands were still feebly trying to stop him. Arnav held her hand above her head and warned her removing her kurti completely.
Arnav: I am going slow doesn't mean that you can try stopping me. your struggle will only make things worse. So better surrender than protest. Else you will be not even fit to cry on your condition.
Saying he bit above her bra line harshly. She let out a cry and said struggling.
Khushi: I am.. Not.. someone.. who would ..c.. cry.. for no.. mis.. take.. of mine.. claim..ing.. my.. body.. like.. this.. doe..snt make.. you vic..tor!!!
Arnav: You are not co operating!! You will Regret this Khushi. A big time.
He tore her bra and threw it somewhere. Now her upper body was let out for his hungry eyes. In his eyes, she was perfect. Not that he has never seen woman before. But she was different. She was the one who protested him and he wanted to bring her on her knees before him. ASR loved challenges!! He touched her one nipple and pinched it. Khushi let out another cry and her hands were trying to push him on his chest and trying to hide herself. But was that possible when Beast was in his full form? Arnav was more than aroused with just the sight of her.
He removed his shirt and pants and bend on her completely. He took her one nipple in his mouth and kneaded the other. She kept hitting him and grabbed his hair to push him away. There was no strength left in her to say anything out of her mouth. His hand slowly moved to her PJs and in one movement he pushed it out of her. There was only one scrap of cloth covering her from his dark eyes. He tore that and placed his mouth over. He bit it, licked it and in short, he was putting her through hell for his personal pleasure. When he was enough hard he came up and looked at her red eyes and her hands that lay defeated on her side. There was a grave look in her eyes that his dark eyes saw but not noticed at the moment. He pulled out his boxers letting him out to stand proudly.
Arnav: Never a woman drove me so crazy Khushi! You are perfect in all senses for me and YOU ARE MINE!!
Saying he moved in her breaking her virgin wall. She let out a loud cry which he suppressed in his mouth closing her mouth. He bit her lips and entered his tongue in her mouth taking pleasure in all possible ways. Khushi clutched the pillow beneath her head in death grip. Her mind was repeating only one thing.
SHE LOST THE BATTLE!! SHE LET THE BEAST WIN HER BODY!! SHE LOST!!
SHE LOST!!
SHE LOST!!
He kept thrusting in her not minding her virgin blood spreading over his bed. He thrust till the beast in him got his claim and came undone. He poured him in her and bit her hard on her neck marking her as his completely. When he was about to move out he heard her feeble voice.
Khushi: You are a beast! I will never let you win. You will regret!
Arnav smirked.
Arnav: I am beast Khushi! But don't forget that you and only you are responsible for whatever happened to you!! What is there for me to regret. I am enjoying this. its pleasure!!
Saying he once again bit her above her collar bone. But she did not cry this time as she passed out because of the events that took toll on her fragile body!
Arnav gathered her in his arms and slept covering them in a quilt.
He will never let her go out of his cage that he has set up for her. This beauty is this Beast's for lifetime.
Devi Maiyya smiled seeing this.
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OHOO GOD WHY ARNAV
ReplyDeleteArnav is one time beast nd one time prince...
ReplyDeleteIn the start of the update he was so much worried about khushi....
But when she woke up, he forced her to eat....
Then scaring her...
She was just trying to save herself from him... Thats y she wanted to runaway from there...
But he gave her the most brutal punishment... Pleasuring himself nd giving pain to her...
Khushi must hav felt miserable...
But He again showed his obsession about her that he wont let her slip away...
Thats why devi maiya smiled... Coz khushi is the girl for him....
wow superb update loved it thank you for pm.
ReplyDeleteHe is the worst beast I have ever heard
ReplyDeleteMy senses r saying he will regret very badly
Honestly i hate this update...
ReplyDeleteArnav raped her...
He is a real beast...
However hard he regrets nothing will change this fact that he raped her...
And devimaiyya smiled?
I don't think any god in any religion will be happy after witnessing girl's destruction like this?
What are you doing meenu yar?
Amina87 from IF...
Arnav claimed Khushi as his physically. He punished her in brutal way for trying to run away from there.
ReplyDeleteHe is really a beast...One time he is behaving like a prince and second moment he turn out to be beast. He will regret what he did with Khushi.
ReplyDeleteArnav is really a beast he will regret
ReplyDeleteBut what is coming now what will be Khushi's next action
aweful
ReplyDeletehe raped her
arnav has to pay for his bad bad deed
he is a monster
poor my little khushi
i think she won't melt so fast she is strong
i'm sure she wiil make him regret and in very bad way
( your faithful reader bellarosa )
m really feeling bad for khushi noo girl deserve pain which khushi going thru i hope regret it that to hard thx for blog link n pm dear roshaan if
ReplyDeleteone moment he cared for her..
ReplyDeletenext he had no mercy....
but he saves and cares and even hurts her...
he claimed her his now...
khushi is totally broken...
fantastic update *Clap*
next update awaited :)
Angeldream14
ReplyDeleteLoved it
but he is a beast
he want to captivate her in his den
poor khushi she lost her battle
but the war is still on
whn will she come to know abt her family n so called ex fiance
That was excellent update ... thx for pm
ReplyDeletePoor khushi. I thought arnav will not force her but torture her to submit.
ReplyDeletean intense update, why is he behaving with her. he will regret big time. poor khushi IF user id laksh65 commented on IF too
ReplyDeletearnav has really confusing behaviour
ReplyDeleteif he beast then y he take care her
poor Kushi lost her battle hope she get some hope
waiting for ARNAV next move
originally posted by Amina87 from IF..
ReplyDelete(Honestly i hate this update...
Arnav raped her...
He is a real beast...
However hard he regrets nothing will change this fact that he raped her...
And devimaiyya smiled?
I don't think any god in any religion will be happy after witnessing girl's destruction like this?
What are you doing meenu yar?)
i have thoughts like her i hate him she raped her in brutal way.
no girl is able to love her rapist.
and God never happy to see a destruction of innocent human being buddy.
he make her starve for days and when she have no energy left he rape her.
wow he think he win and i think he will in destroying her completely.
khushi will not able to cop with it i know because for every girl this is biggest pain and hurt in world that man can advantage of their condition because they are stronger physically.
i just hate him and want to kill him with my bare hands.
but i love this story buddy update soon.
musax007 from IF
so at last arnav gave in to the beast within him........... hope he will be able to take in the repentence laid out for him by DM
ReplyDeletefeeling bad 4 khushi........
ReplyDeletearnav is a monster.......
update soon.....
thanx 4 d pm.....
dhanyac(IF)
felt bad for khushi
ReplyDeletemust say she is a fighter and a strong woman
Thank you so much for your lovely comments..those who are angry with arnav i just want to tell have faith in me i won't let you down and wait for next update that is going to be more intense and written by me..love u guys muahh
ReplyDeleteArnav is actually in the beast story but khushi love will change in Prince charming.
ReplyDeleteAn amazing update.....
ReplyDeleteFinally arnav has marked khushi as his....
Amazing update love it
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ReplyDeletearnav is an enigma
ReplyDeleteone moment he is so sweet n caring like a prince
he made her eat..even saved her from falling
n the very next so cruel just like a devil
he didn't bother for her feelings
he just claimed her to be his
he is really gonna regret badly
poor khushi she lost the battle
but she will make arnav repent badly for this
can't wait to read more
update soon
thanks for the PM
Awesome update...........thanks for the PM
ReplyDeleteAfter reading this chapter i have a doubt...
ReplyDeleteWill Arnav force her again and again to claim his rights on her?
I really want to know what Khushi will do now?
How will Arnav realise that he has destroyed her forever?
It's obvious that Khushi will hate him like anything now...
How he will cope with it now?
Arnav should be punished.��Crying so hard for khushi! ��
ReplyDeleteArnav is really a beast...
ReplyDeletePlz make him repent on his deeds like hell...
I want justice for Khushi...
awesome ...arnav the beast i can't heat him....but he is really devil man here
ReplyDeleteawesome....he will regret one day
ReplyDeleteI'm starting to read this ff n it's mind blowing
ReplyDeleteSo once again I'm here awesome updt
ReplyDeleteReally painful to see Khushi in such horrible condition....arnav will regret big time... IF I'd is mamree
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